I would like to see a background picture which conjures up an image of China. Perhaps a western Chinese mountain range or something else that when one looks at the picture one thinks of China. I'd rather not see the Great Wall of China because I feel that would be too cheesy.
I would also like to see something about how this herb has been a clinically-proven weight loss tool, INCREASES metabolism, targets excess belly fat, etc....obviously make it sound nicer than that but you hopefully get the idea.
Something like "Lose weight now using traditional Chinese medicine" or something akin to that. Also something at the bottom of the ad like "TRY NOW RISK FREE TODAY" or something to that effect would be nice. Something which tells the customer that they should act NOW and not later.
Also I want to see something which IMMEDIATELY grabs the customer's attention in the headline.....ALL CAPS for the first line....maybe like "UNLEASH your...." or "LOSE WEIGHT with...." I Don't know, play around with it, but I need something which grabs my attention and keeps me looking at the ad...and makes me believe that I, the customer, could lose weight with this product which uses traditional Chinese medicine.